Whales Inspire Middletown Boy To Write Winning Essay About His 'Dream Job'
Read Ahren Kapur-Sarma's story about his fascination with marine life, recognized by The New Jersey Association for Gifted Children. Ahren is a 2nd grader at Fairview Elementary.
On Saturday in Somerset, Ahren Kapur-Sarma will be recognized for winning 1st Place in the PreK-2 division of the Writing Contest. His winning essay is published below.
My Dream Job, by Ahren Kapur-Sarma
My dream job is to be a marine biologist. It all started in first grade. I was looking for a book to read and I found a book about whales in my classroom bookshelf. It was called “Whales: the gentle giants”. I started to read it and copy pictures from the book. When I was done with the book I had learned fun facts about whales which made me want to learn much more about them and the other creatures that live in the ocean. I started looking for more books on whales at the library.
One book taught me about the evolution chain of a whale. Whales came from a mammal that lived on land. We know they were land creatures because of the fossils of their ancestors that were found in Pakistan. We also know that whales evolved from land because they breathe like us, not like fish. That is why whales and dolphins swim up to the surface of the sea to breathe.
During my summer break this year, I went with my family to Quebec, Canada, where I saw minke whales, fin whales, humpback whales and beluga whales in the Lawrence River and the Saguenay River. It made me happy to see these beautiful creatures in their natural habitat. But I was sad to read about whale hunting, because of which many whale species are endangered. I felt I should study sea creatures to know more about their lives and help them survive.
Marine biologists are scientists who study ocean life. They try to understand the behavior of sea animals and the facts about the world they live in. I want to be a marine biologist to use science to learn about the oceans and marine life. I want to use that knowledge to save their environment.
I also want to be a marine biologist to discover new and unknown things about whales. At the end of one book about whales I saw a picture of a sperm whale. When I looked closely at the picture, I saw that it had a giant squid on its face. Then I read the paragraph about it, which described the biggest fight in the sea. A sperm whale and squid fighting each other. The sperm whale can dive three thousand feet deep and hold its breath for two hours at a time, to find giant squids which they love to eat. Like most toothed whales, sperm whales can make a clicking sound that can travel a long distance. They use this to find food by echo location.
We know that sperm whales fight with giant squids because we see scars on their skin left by the suckers of the squid. However, scientists do not really know how they fight with each other. As a marine biologist, I want to study the duel between these two animals. Maybe I will discover new information that will interest everybody.
In science there are a lot of things we learn about whales. We know there are toothed whales and baleen whales, and we know that whales sing songs that they use to talk to each other. We know that grey whale rarely have barnacles on their right side! We do not really know what the whale songs mean. We do not fully know why grey whales like to feed by scraping their right side on the ocean floor. There are lot of things to find out and questions to answer about marine animals. I think I will enjoy finding some of these answers.
Joe Reynolds
9:54 pm on Monday, March 4, 2013
While seeing a whale along the Jersey Shore or near New York Harbor might sound far-fetched, they can in fact be found in all oceans of the world, including near New Jersey and New York.
Between 2008 and 2009, Prof. Christopher Clark, Bioacoustics Research Program at the Cornell Lab of Ornithology in Ithaca, New York, had a network of ten underwater sound recorders off the south coast of Long Island and throughout New York Harbor. During that time, he picked up the songs of the fin whale, blue whale, humpback whale, minke whale, sei whale, and the rare North Atlantic right whale. A surprising density of whales so close to one of the most urban coastlines in the world.
Moreover, recent evidence suggests that as many as 30 to 50 fin whales now live full-time about 10 miles in the waters off the coast of Sandy Hook, just past the Verrazano Bridge.
There should be no doubt that marine mammals call our little piece of the Blue Planet home and we (humans) in return should do everything we can to make sure their home is natural, wild, and free from pollution.
Joe Reynolds
http://natureontheedgenyc.blogspot.com/
Ravi
5:31 pm on Tuesday, March 5, 2013
Hello Joe, that is very interesting information. Ahren has done a few whale watching trips on the Jersey shore but had no luck in spotting one. He will find your response encouraging.
Mignona Cote
10:42 pm on Sunday, March 10, 2013
This was a great article. I just returned from Maui on my annual whale watching trip and learned that only the males sing within the humpback family. I have been making this trip since 1996 and I think that I will join you as this also being my dream job. You will be very successful and are off to a good start. Keep us informed of your research.
Mignona
divya kapur
1:53 pm on Wednesday, March 20, 2013
Thanks for your kind words Mignona, will show your response to Ahren.
Diane Blue
9:07 pm on Tuesday, March 19, 2013
Wonderful essay, Ahren! If I was young, like you, I would also want to be involved in whale research. Being retired, and able to go to Maui every year, it's always such a great pleasure to see the humpbacks and their babies!
Diane
divya kapur
3:17 pm on Wednesday, March 20, 2013
Thanks for your comments Diane, we do hope to take Ahren to Hawaii sometime so he can see the humpbacks.